Nice sequence Eddie, the action reads really well. There is but one little detail to consider. Not that you have to change it or anything but on the close-up of the hero drawing the sword, he has a normal overhand grip as he draws the sword but then he slashes up. Normal overhand grip usually indicates that the sharp edge faces up so the audience is anticipating on the hero cutting downwards instead of up. If he held the grip like my doodle, the audience would anticipate him cutting upwards instead.Sword underhanded grip doodle
I totally trust your comment!!! Since you are studying the art! Thanks for the tip!
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